Thursday, 17 June 2010

Vengeful Wrongdoing

Theme; Murder
Protagonist; A young girl named...unamed, let's leave her unamed, it's a first person narrative

A sudden light from the doorway burns my eyes and my heart frantically speeds up. The desperate shriek that escapes my lips rings in my ears as my attacker approaches. The light hindering my vision still shines, penatrating into my cowering eyes. Yet, in the shadows, I see the outline of a hand reaching to choke the breath out of me. I screech and scramble to back up, but my head strikes against the concrete wall behind me, disorienting me momentarily. Now I see the sneer on my attacker's sadistic face.

Her hands clenched around my neck and pain shoots up, springing tears from my horrified eyes. Gasping for air that won't come I slip toward blissful unconciousness. My heart pounds for nonexsistent oxygen and suffocation is inevitable. My killer stares into me fiercely, "I can't forgive you," she vented. The hold tightened. I was dying.

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